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Army Of One by ~worlddominator:iconworlddominator:

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Army Of One
I知 all by myself,
I stand alone,
But I値l keep on fighting,
Let my spirit be shown.

My comrades are down,
They致e taken the fall,
But hope is not gone,
Or at least not all.

For the loss of my friends
Will not go in vain,
Because I will defeat the enemy,
And accept the pain.



03/05/07
©2007-2009 ~worlddominator
:iconworlddominator:

Author's Comments

I wrote this last nite...i was just thinkin...i wonder wut it wood b like if i were an army of one...so i wrote this...at like 11 last nite...it came out pretty much how i wanted it to...except for bein like...the best poem in the world...which i want everything i do to b >.<...well, i cant write anymore cuz my parents will b home soon, and i will b in trouble...bye!

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:iconsonawolf-genie:
~SonaWolf-Genie Mar 6, 2007, 1:00:14 PM
Thats true. People have to move on nomater what happens. I like your poem!!

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:iconkinako-chan:
~kinako-chan Mar 6, 2007, 1:46:26 PM
er....you spelled "vein" wrong...it "vain"
please dont think that i'm a know-it-all!! i love your poems; i can't rhyme like that >.<

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~haku~
"Is there someone....precious...to you..? Someone....that you would...fight for....and protect.....with....your life..?
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~Pook06 Mar 6, 2007, 5:56:48 PM
nice poem.

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never underestimate an idiot with a bad idea ;P
:iconworlddominator:
~worlddominator Mar 6, 2007, 6:44:05 PM
tyvm! yeah, even if its hard, its better to just move on and not let it drag u down...

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If you're reading this, then you must be bored...
:iconworlddominator:
~worlddominator Mar 6, 2007, 6:45:34 PM
i dont thinkur a know it all...but ty a lot for pointin that out! ill go change it now...and reprint it...i like my stuff to b perfect for some reason...i looked it up, and i knew sumthin was wrong! and ty for the compliment, too!

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If you're reading this, then you must be bored...
:iconworlddominator:
~worlddominator Mar 6, 2007, 6:45:41 PM
ty ^ ^

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If you're reading this, then you must be bored...
:iconkinako-chan:
~kinako-chan Mar 6, 2007, 6:48:03 PM
np

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~hinata~
"I...will..never..give..up..that..is.. my..nindo...my..ninja..word..."
:iconsonawolf-genie:
~SonaWolf-Genie Mar 6, 2007, 7:13:22 PM
Your welcome!! <3

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The Pirate's life for me.

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Visted my base acount Sona-Wolf.
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The Pirates life for me.
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I believe in Jesus Christ my Saviour. If you do too, copy and paste this into your signature.
:iconkittymao16:
~kittymao16 Feb 13, 2008, 1:45:29 PM
*salutes* nice work! i salute your good work. keep it up. i am in the army and well i appreciate you writing something like this. thank you.

PVT. Copeland

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my friendships are what make me stronger but my curiosity is what makes me weak 8=^-^=8
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